My New Editor

Natalie and I are both writing, and Kai just decided that he’s going to try his paw at lesbian romance. Specifically, he’s kind of a critic of this scene in Forever and a Knight and thought he could make it better. Do you like his edits? ;D

“And when Attis bends her head toward me, I can see strange, pulsing lines of white light begin to curve up from the ground, spiraling around her body, feeding down her arms and into my b -======================qaZqA0000000000000000000000000000000000000

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About Bridget Essex

Author of lesbian romances; madly in love with my wife, author Natalie Vivien.
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2 Responses to My New Editor

  1. Ha! Ha! I can relate πŸ™‚

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